Conrad Rice

So Cold-Breaking Benjamin

6/10 I'm not much for whimsical stuff, sorry.

If you could help me out with this, I would be ever so grateful. :)

Got your story, Kylan. Next contestant, step right up.

Wow. Wow, wow, wow. W-O-W. That was a very interesting piece. It would be kind of interesting to know just how you got your idea for this story. This odd ...

Bear, Jamie, got yours taken care of. Who's next?

Well, this second chapter was better. When Brad was talking with his friends in the hospital room it felt like real teenage boy dialogue. I liked when you had the ...

I couldn't really tell if the person writing the letter was in an insane asylum or a nursing home. She described everybody there as nutjobs, but that might be the ...

wiseman, took care of yours. Sorry about it's brevity. I'm no good at poems, and don't post a lot when something's good anyway.

This is good. There's not really much more I can say about this, other than it shows that you have a lot of ability and that if you cultivate it ...

The house burned in the night. The firefighters hung back, kept at bay by the ferocity of the inferno. They didn’t want to just sit there. There was someone inside, ...

Anything that the Joker says in The Dark Knight. Especially this line: "How 'bout a magic trick?"

Got one of yours, Swottielottie.

Well, I'm here to review, since you asked. You have what promises to be a very interesting story. But something seems a little off in this story. I'm going to ...

took care of fourthelement